The task was to describe a person called Alma that turns into a doll after we watched the short film. We had to inclued adjectives, but it coudn't be sad and happy it could be joyful and sobbing. The bits I found hard were finding intresting adjectives and trying not to use the words happy or sad. I enjoyed it putting me to the test and challenging me. next time I think I would try to use even more difficult adjectives.
Hi Stephanie
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This is a wonderful piece of descriptive writing. Well done, I really enjoyed reading it. I love that you describe her as a curious little girl. She definitely was that. I don't think I would have walked into that shop. It was a little bit creepy!
Well done, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)